I’ve read Harlan Coben and Baldacci and others so its no wonder I finally came around to the mystery myself. Of course, I haven’t even mentioned the genre within the genre - Cozy mysteries, which by their popularity have a niche all to themselves. Our local chapter of Sisters in Crime has one of the best in the romcom/mystery niche represented by Agnes Alexander (BTW - not her real name) and another author that has a cozy series surrounding her job in a small town library.
During this process I’ve manage to fumble my way
through the erstwhile mystery of mystery writing and have picked up a few editing
tips of the trade I try to use to improve my writing.
- · Remember
that your readers are smart (probably smarter than me/you)
- · Portray
your characters through their dialogue, actions, and thoughts.
- · Use
sensory impressions to evoke imagery instead of exposition.
- · Watch
out for redundancy between what’s shown and what’s told.
- · Make
sure your character’s feelings are theirs and not your own.
- · Be
careful with your red herrings so they accomplish what your mystery needs.
Outside of all that – writing the mystery is like
walking down a dark alley at two in the morning in the wrong side of town
without a gun.