I have discovered one of the difficulties of becoming a
professional writer later in life is someone, somehow, has changed English
grammar.
In eighth grade back in the dinosaur days, I aced English
grammar. I was still of an age where I was comfortable with “rules.” Like math,
where two plus two always added up to equal four, if there was a hard and fast
grammar rule, I ingrained it in my brain. Through the years I’ve fallen back on
those rules to get me through my school term papers, my creative writing efforts
(which were few and far between while I raised my six children), to correct my
children’s term papers, my business correspondence on my jobs, and my reports
and grievance files as a union steward.
Then I started writing fiction—novelettes to full-length books—only to
discover someone along the way has changed the rules, especially
in regards to the use of commas. I first noticed it when a ran across either a
blog post or Facebook discussion about it no longer being necessary to use a
comma before ending a sentence with the words “too” or “also.” Example: “I want
to go to the store, too.” is now written as “I want to go to the store too.”
WHAT?!? That comma in the sentence is a rule. That has
stuck with me from dinosaur days until now. However, after doing a little
research, I discovered that current style manuals have declared that little ol’
comma is no longer necessary.
My most recent line editor just shattered for me another rule.
It involves FANBOYS. What are FANBOYS? That almost sounds a little risqué. No
such luck. It is an acronym for:
For
And
Nor
But
Or
Yet
So
I don’t recall any rules about FANBOYS from my eighth
grade grammar class up through college. I was kindly told by my latest copy
editor friend there is a reason. In the “old days” coordinating conjunctions
which joined independent clauses always had a comma before them.
Example: “I went to the store, and he insisted he go with me.” Now those commas
before the “and” (or any of the FANBOYS conjunctions I might have used in its
place) is no longer necessary unless the author wants to place them there for
effect, or to create a pause for emphasis, or as part of a character’s speaking
style.
WHAT?!? We can be creative? There are rules, but we don’t
always have to stick to them? My thirteen year-old grammar ace self would not
have found that acceptable. Neither would have my eighth grade English teacher.
And, it used to be a big no-no to start a sentence with
any of the FANBOYS. Nor, did you use a comma after a FANBOYS at the start of a
sentence because starting a sentence with a FANBOYS just was not done. But, it
may be done now for effect. Yet, if the author wants to use a comma for effect,
he or she may. Or not. For "someone" have changed the rules. So, someone like me who loves to start sentences with
FANBOYS conjunctions finds that particular change in the rules to be a good
thing.
But, any writer who wants to be published needs to find out what set of
grammar rules their editor or publisher prefers and write in a style acceptable
to that publishing house.
In other words, find out what style manual your publisher
uses and how hard and fast said publisher sticks to it.
I actually have a style manual in my possession I purchased decades ago. It is
the one published by Merriam-Webster. Unfortunately, I have never hear of anyone declare they use that style manual. Several publishers like The Chicago Manual of Style. The rules in the various style manuals will be similar, but not always the same, because someone,
somewhere, somehow has changed some of the grammar rules in the last half
century.
Or, if you are really lucky, your editor may rely on what she learned in her eighth grade grammar class back in the dinosaur days.
Zina
Abbott is the pen name used by Robyn Echols for her historical novels. Her
novel, Family Secrets, was
published by Fire Star Press. Her novelette, A Christmas Promise, along
with the first two novellas in the Eastern
Sierra Brides 1884 series, Big Meadows Valentine and A Resurrected Heart, was
published by Prairie Rose Publications.
Commas have always been the bane of my existence. I know they are necessary,but...Doris McCraw/Angela Raines-author
ReplyDeleteI would never claim to have possession of my grammar or punctuation--not now or back in the Jurassic period of my life. I keep trying though. Thank you for the pointers.
ReplyDeleteI keep putting in the old commas, myself. The new rule that really gets to me is the singular "their," as in, "A customer can pick up their order at the front counter." I will never get used to that!
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